Did You Broke a Window?
Did You Broke a Window?
Have you ever broke a window just because you could not enter to your house?, well, if you do not, let me tell you my story of how I broke a window on my house. I was 7 years old, I was in the schoolar bus coming to my house, that was in 2014. When I arrive to my house, I only had one key to open one door (there are 3 on my house) so I wait till my mom arrive.
I wait for 30 minutes, I started to desperate, I felt powerless of not being able to enter my house, I felt like a prsioner but outdoors. Then, I continue waiting to my mom and I started doing my homeworks, it was really difficult because the space where I did it was not stable and rough making a lttle bit of damage to my elbows. Next, when I finish some of my homeworks, I get bored and I start trying to enter my house.
After 1 hour waiting to my mom, I decide to enter to my house by force, I saw that in the garage I could climb towards a very little space between the roof and the door of the garage, I felt like SpiderMan. Then, I was seeing the way where I can get into my house, and I see a window where I could enter, but, because I was a small boy, I could not get to that part of the door, then I decide to catch a grill, and some other things, to make easier to get there, then with my strengh of other planet (sarcasm) I get a hoe and I broke the window, and get into my house, I felt a very gratifying peace, then my dad start calling, and I felt nervious, like if an assassin was in my house, I started crying, and then, 5 minutes later, my mom arrives to my house.
Finally, when my mom arrived, I felt angry, it was not her fault, the traffic was horrible that day, she punished me, but then she gave me a very big hug and I felt well and I stop crying. With this I learned that I have to be more pacient, and also that I do not have to break windows.
First of all, thanks for making me laugh a little. I loved your experience, because it can be easily understood, it is out of the ordinary and it entertained me a lot.
ResponderEliminarI imagine that you must have been very scared to be alone outside your house, since you were very small. But I think you handled the situation very well, since you waited a long time for your mother, but you took advantage of the time doing your homework, even if it was in an uncomfortable place. That shows that you are responsible.
I don't blame you for breaking the window; I think you were very brave. In your place, I would have started to cry.
I think your blog is well organized, it is well understood because you explained every detail of what happened and it is also accompanied by several images that help to understand it and attract the reader's attention.
it was super good, very funny, very good the experience you had but also the panic of being so long outside but it was a good idea to do it because otherwise there was no other way to get in but super and very funny thanks, the laughs were not lacking haha
ResponderEliminarOmg you broken a window, me too bur don’t tell my parents, they Will get angry with me, I love when your mom arrived home, I laught in that part, seriusly and when you starting to desesperate was crazy, you really cought my atention with the images and attention getter of your blog, the rest of your structure was very nice and I kinda like it, because when I was Reading your blog I imagine all the things that happened with all the details, because you describe it with strong adjectives, I don’t lie it was very funny for me, also I think you was like I Little cute boy crying because he broke a window and you mom maybe was angry with you, Finally your conclusión was excelent, it was short but it have all the components ther, I love your blog, it was funny and really really cool.
ResponderEliminarWell I really liked your story and you made me laugh a little, for my part I have relived an experience I had one day, at times I imagined how you were and how someone stole you and I loved the part you put in parentheses (sarcasm) I laughed a little just thinking about how it was, I think that unlike other people you handled it super well, you concentrated on doing other things instead of thinking that you were outside your house and with no one to help you open the door so you could get in, at times I thought you were going to stay outside your house for a long time, but you know I think it was the last option I would have had too. I liked your story and a good narrative paragraph.
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ResponderEliminarHello Diego, to begin with I have never broken a window to enter my house, since I have never reached that point, worse if I remember an experience that I had that was that I had to climb on top of the house to be able to enter my house and it was something dangerous but luckily everything went well and I felt like my heart was racing in a gigantic way, but continuing with your blog it seems incredible that there I broke a window to be able to enter your house since I would never have dared to do that since being honest my mom would have beaten me up, In general I find your blog very entertaining and in general it seems very cool that you have put many images since I can imagine the situation in my head and in general an amazing and quite funny bloog. Sebastian triana
ResponderEliminarWow!, dude I pass through something very similar, just that I don’t broke any window, I love your blog, because I understand your pain and the way you felt at that moment, maybe that is why we are also Friends (or maybe no, meh who knows ;w;). About your personal narrative blog, I should say that I like it, because I said before, it reminds me to an experience really similar to this one that I lived when I were about 7 years old, anyway, I also like the fast and direct way you count it, but it continuous being really easy to understand and it is a really interesting and funny experience, and from my point of view you were really paitient, because waiting her for an hour is too much, I did not were able to wait 15 minutes when I was young (Still now I am not really patient in some cases). I also should say that you impress me with the fact that you handle it with a loto f calm.
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